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This response submitted by Hays Cummins (haysc@muohio.edu) at 1:32 pm on 10/5/00. Additions were last made on Monday, October 16, 2000. Section: Cummins

Hello,

I believe you hacve the makings of a very fine project here. I have been impressed with your initiative and the depth of thought that has gone into your work!

Some suggestions for the second draft:

  • There is no connection with the literature on beauty and self/body image at all! How can this be? This state of affairs needs to change. Your study needs to be put into a larger context of what others have done before you. The lierature is out there--just go get it. This is very important
  • What types of statistical analyses do you plan on doing? and, why?

    Well, these are a few of my thoughts. Keep up the good work.

    All the best,
    Hays


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