This response submitted by Lauren Schone
(emmers94@aol.com) at 2:48 am on 10/25/01.
Additions were last made on Friday, April 19, 2002. Section:
Hey! I like your idea and your packet seems to be coming along well. I do have a few suggestions though. First of all, you did not have an abstract before your intro. That is something that you probably want to get in there. I also think that you should go back and fix up some of the grammatical mistakes. You have some funny letters going on in your packet! I think that your packet would be somewhat more "inviting" if you were to format your information a little bit differetly. Try putting a space in between lines where appropriate just so that everything does not run together. Also, maybe think about putting in some pictures or graphs of some sort. I really liked that you included your surveys-it was a nice touch. Good luck and have fun. Lauren