HYPOTHESIS It was clear and testable, however i was wondering are your approach distance figures random? If not, perhaps you could include others in your alternative hypothesis. INTRODUCTION This was clear, relevant, and had all the needed references. METHODS: These were lacking a bit in detail. If i was given these, i wouldn't be able to complete the experiment, because your different approach styles weren't given. Also, perhaps you could clarify how you will tell when a squirrel is foraging or not. VARIABLES: You didn't establish a results page, so your variables weren't apparent to me. OUR DAY: Sounds like it will be a fun day outside, I can't wait. Good job guys!