I think your idea sounds interesting. I would suggest as far as pure structure elements of your proposal that you may want to include your resources more subtly. You could try and introduce them in with your ideas and how they fit into your project, not just list them off. The methods may be a little too constraining for people, it doesn't offer much of a choice, but it is a good way to keep the answers fitting to your ideas. I think your our day sounds well planned. In general an interesting project, Good luck!